英语作文 篇1
Last sunday, my friend LiXuan and I took a train to Qing Dao. First, We visited the ocean in motion and played many exciting games. Later, we went to the Buddy Bear restaurant and got some delicious food. Furthermore, We went to the beach and played in the water. also, we took photos with the foreigners at the beach. we had a great time there. I think Qing Island is really a exciting place. If I have the time ,I will go there again!
英语作文 篇2
sea otters off the coast of Californiahave an unusual method of getting food．They dive to the floor of the sea to find the shell－fish they like．
When an otter brings a shellfish to the surface of the water，he floats on his back and puts the shellfish on his chest．Then the otter digs the meat out of the shell with his teeth．
Sea otters are especially fond of shellfish with a very hard shell．When the otter brings up one of these，he also brings a stone．He puts the stone on his chest，holding the shellfish in his front paws．He takes a wide swing and smashes the hard shell on the stone．Then he has no trouble getting at the meat in the shell．
生活在加利福尼亚近海的海獭，其取食方法很不寻常，它们潜入海底去寻找它们喜欢的甲壳动物。
当海獭把一只甲壳动物挟持到水面时，就背朝下浮在水面上，把甲壳动物抱在胸前，然后用牙把肉从壳中剔出。
海獭尤喜食长有坚壳的甲壳动物。当海獭把这样一只甲壳动物带到水面时，同时也带上来一块石头。它把石头放在胸前，用前爪抓住这只甲壳动物。它大幅度地摆动一下身体，对着石头猛击坚硬的甲壳，然后，取壳中肉就没有麻烦了。
英语作文 篇3
Come to learn Chinese in Pujiang! We are planning a Chinese summer camp for you because summer camps are very popular with students. And we will also offer you great summer courses. You can learn about Chinese culture and improve your Chinese during the summer camp.
The summer camp lasts for two weeks and it starts at the end of July. You will have Chinese classes for four hours a day. We’ll set tests to check your progress once a week. You are certain to get the best possible experience of Chinese learning and life in Pujiang because you can stay as a guest with a Chinese family and take part in their daily activities. Many students usually form close friendships with the family.
After class, we plan other activities, such as climbing MountXianhua, you can also try some skin of soya-bean milk , a kind of local food in Pujiang. And Xianhua Hot Spring is a good place to relax yourself after climbing.So remember to fill out a form and pay for the course at least one month before it starts. Do not wait, come and join us right away.
英语作文 篇4
今天，可真是个令人紧张的日子啊。
早上，姚煜辰宣布下午要来抽背英语课本中的一篇短文。大家一听，紧张得不得了。下课时，大家就马上看着英语短文，努力地背着。可是，我是越看越忘，越看越紧张，我心想：这下可得完蛋了。
下午，走进教室，她先抽背了几个同学，可那几个同学都不会背。这时，我的心跳不由地加快速度，目不转睛地盯着姚雨辰。与此同时，姚雨辰也用她那双明亮的眼睛不停地教室里巡视。这时的她仿佛就是一个可怕的魔鬼，在看哪个同学的肉更新鲜。我心里不停地念叨着：上天保佑，姚煜辰你可千万不要抽到我啊。这时，班长自告奋勇地站了起来，我看他是那么地紧张，脸涨得通红，说话也变得结巴了，刚背了第一句就忘了下一句，吭哧了一会儿又记起来了，很不顺畅，但总算过了关，这让姚煜辰那严肃的脸上露出了一丝阳光。终于，姚煜辰停止了搜寻，宣布暂停抽查。
啊！这真是让人害怕的抽查，下次，我一定要赶紧背出。
英语作文 篇5
作文题目
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的`情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：
1.词数：100左右：
2.参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
我很高兴收到你的来信，我很高兴听到你会去中国学习中文。我已经找到了你的菲亚特。在芳草街，不远处就是我们中文学校。你可以坐11路车，前一站就是中文学校。公寓第三层有3间，其中一间是卧室，另一间是浴室和厨房。这里有一张床，一张沙发，一张桌子和几把椅子，在这25平方米的小公寓里，租金是每月500元。也许这辆菲亚特不是你的愿望，但我会尽我最大的努力来满足你的需求。如果不够，写信给我，我会找另一个更好的地方。
Hope you will come here soon!希望你不久就来这儿！
All the best!所有最好的！
Yours, Li Hua你的，李华
满分理由
本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以'which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。
英语中，同一思想用不同句式表达，其效果会大不相同。要想写出好的文章，就要不断地变化句子的结构形式。
l、长短句交替使用
句子的长短是为表达思想服务的。英语短句结构简单，意思明白具有生动活泼而又干脆利索的表达效果，而长句结构复杂，信息丰富，能表达成熟的思想与复杂的概念。一味地使用长句或短句会使文章显得单调，乏味，从而影响文章的总体效果。科学地交替使用长短句使句子结构变化多样，不仅给文章带来顿挫起伏的语言美感，而且可以受到理想的修辞效果。请看下面的这段话：
She returned to her office.There was a note under the door. It was from Mr May.He said he was waiting for her in the coffee room.And he bad not found her sister.Hewas sorry to have missed her.
这段话用了一连串的短句，读起来单调呆板，平淡无味。为使文字更加生动，意思更加明确可改为：
When she returned to her office，the found a note from Mr May under the door.He said he was waiting for her in the coffee room and hadnt found her sister yet.Headded that he was sorry to have missed her.
修改后三个句子长短不一，读起来就给人以不同的感觉。
又如《大学英语》第一册第十课 Going Home，当汽车驶至 Brunsnick，车上的年轻人看见黄手帕时，出现了以下这两行文字：
Then，suddenly，all of the young people were up out of thelr seats，screamlng andshouting and cryin, doing small dances of joy.All except Vlngo.这两句话一长(23个词)一短(3个词)，彼此衬托互为凸现。第一句的两个and和四个-ing词，把热闹、喧哗的气氛喧染极至，长句之后，蜂回路转，一个仅三个词的短句扑入读者的双目几乎沸腾的场面顿时凝固但其余音未绝，此时外表虽冷漠，内心却炙热难当。
2、句子开头的多样化
“主-谓-宾”、“主-系-表”是英语的基本句型，主语领先句也是用得最多的句型。写作中为避免形式单一，当句子可以用主语开头，同时又可以其它结构开头时，不妨变换一下。如：
(1)Defeated in the minor exchanges,I now play my queen of trumps.(分词短语做状语开头)
(2)There are two ways in which one can own a book.( there be句型开头)
(3)Equally important is a good habit of reading(表语开头)
以上各句都可以用主语开句，但在篇章中通过改变句子开头，文章就会疏落有致，语言形式丰富多采。
3、句子结构的多样化
写作中可以通过句型结构的变化来增添文采，强化表现力。如：
(l) The love of the liberty is the love of the others;the love of power ls thelove of ourselves.
(平行结构.这类结构整齐、紧凑;句子生动、鲜明，语义贯通、语势强劲有力。)
(2)The days when we suffered from oppression and exploitation are gone.(这样表达文字通顺，但语意不很突出。)
改为：Gone are the days when we suffered fron oppression andexploitation.
(采用倒装句结构后，充分体现出受剥削受压迫的人民解放后扬眉吐气的心情。)
附注：
各个档次的给分范围及标准(满分25分)
A.第五档(很好)：(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。
B.第四档(好)：(16-20分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.达到了预期的写作目的。
C.第三档(适当)：(11-15分)1.基本完成了试题规定的`任务。2.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。6.整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
D.第二档(较差)：(6-10分)1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
E.第一档(差)：(1-5分)1.未完成试题规定的任务。2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。6.信息未能传达给读者。
F.不得分：(0分)未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
假设你是李华，你的`英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：
1．词数：100左右：
2．参考词汇：房租Tent(n.).
文章：
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。
